Two people , two brain , two name – poetry slam

Hey bloggers welcome back to another blog post. This blog post is the poetry slam that happening right now. Me and Karolina did one together. Here’s is Karolinas blog.Our poem was about two people and we talk about there live. My bit is kinda sad and Karolina’s is bright and happy. I would really appreciate if you coull give me and Karolina some feedback.

2 thoughts on “Two people , two brain , two name – poetry slam”

  1. Nice work Neha and Karolina. Good to see you have fun with this. Just do a little editing, no space needed for a comma after a word and I on it’s own is a capital. Thanks for sharing in class.

  2. Nice work Neha. Good to see you have fun with this. Just do a little editing, no space needed for a comma after a word and ‘I’ on it’s own is a capital. Thanks for sharing in class.