Summer learning journey – task 52 – poem

Hey bloggers,

Welcome back to  another summer learning journey task. For this task I have made poem! For this poem i made a sad one about death. so yeah here is my poem


3 thoughts on “Summer learning journey – task 52 – poem

  1. Kia ora Neha,

    This is a beautiful poem, Neha. It never is easy to deal with the death of a loved one, and you are right that it takes time. I think poetry and other forms of art are great examples of outlets to deal with grief. I really like the words you have chosen and the message of this poem. Ka pai. Is poetry an outlet for you? I see you have shared some great poems on your blog recently.

    Ngā mihi,
    Simon (SLJ)

  2. Kia ora Neha. Thanks for being brave and sharing your poem on such a huge subject. I agree with Simon about the importance of having an outlet to deal with grief. Whether that’s writing a poem or just talking to someone. I also like the way you’ve chosen a black background. This matches the seriousness of the subject. Do you think you’ll carry on writing poetry after the Summer Learning Journey? I think you’ve got a real talent.

    1. HI Phil, Thank you Phil for the comment i really respect it. I will continue writing poems . What is your favorite piece of writing?
      By Neha

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